New hardcore/metalcore song

Hey Twisted, Actually is pretty good. I'm a guitar player too. A lot older than you and different genre though. I only have one critical thing to say.....Your left hand fretting is really good and from what I can see pretty accurate. My suggestion to you is to relax your picking hand, don't press down so hard especially with drop tunings because the strings are much looser and go out of tune easier. Move closer to the bridge and fan your fingers. Relax! Great job!