Shattered Souls: The Broken Man, A Tale Of The Witchkin by D. Wayne Harbison, Cheating Wife Stories,

Need a part 3

ok was worth the wait great 2 part story

LLC this one needs part 3

Decent story, but most certainly is not finished. The time jumps are a bit disorienting, but love the fantasy aspect. Add a part 3 and finish the Yale!

Just gonna say ahead of time, no hate to the channel. Got to have the bad with the good and they get a bunch of different sources for their stories so this isn’t on them at all. With that out of the way, this story honestly sucks immensely. Mainly because of the lack of an ending but also I hate how there are no repercussions for the mcs Brother, dad, step mom and ex gf. Also, almost forcing the mc to try to reconcile or have any type of contact is so immensely stupid to me. Like, it’s the fact that a lot of the guys family try to have a relationship with his older brother. He was literally threatening to beat up his other brother for calling out all the horrible shit he did. It also doesn’t help that the older brother showed he didn’t regret anything he did. Honestly, I could maybe understand if it was just the cheating but with how bad the older brother beat the MC. That would be enough to never talk to him again for me. He nearly almost killed him. He also caused him to go blind in one eye and have only one testicle. To add he literally stole his brothers highschool sweetheart. Truthfully honest, it annoys me how almost everyone is so passive to the things that were done. Like sure they bring it up to remind their older brother that it was done but really. There were no repercussions. The dad , even tried to make it easier for the older brother and basically stone walled his other son. He only opened up to a degree because of his son’s kids. That’s the big reason any of them are trying to be civil which is understandable but the problem is I feel to some degree. You can’t just make that the biggest reason to forgive or let something slide if someone did something truly horrendous. Sometimes people need to be cut out. Overall, this story sucks because the older brother won and faces no real backlash whatsoever. The MC is for some reason going out of his way to make it easier on his older brother and the whole family that betrayed him. Not only that, but continues to be disrespected at times. At some point, you got to say enough is enough and just cut your losses. Not go back where there is nothing truly good waiting for you.

Please tell me there is a part 3, otherwise I’m certain I’m never listening to another story here ever again

What a shit ending

I enjoyed this story but it does feel incomplete. It needs a part 3 to wrap things up. Too many loose ends.

Just spent 6 hours listening to a 2 hour story that doesn't end.

Man I'm loving this story

Don't care about the relationship stuff but love the witchkin an werewolf part

Hi. Well, my thoughts are that I'm very disappointed. The parts of this story were obviously misnumbered because there is definitely at least one part missing and quite possibly several more parts. C'mon, LLC, although this story is by D. Wayne Harbison, you have the ultimate say so over what gets posted. For whatever reason, you chose to post an obviously unfinished story. You have caught a lot of grief in the past for this and you should have learned by now to vet each story and make certain it is complete and ready to go. Having said this, you can redeem yourself by enlisting the original author or possibly Maliciouslogic3740 to finish what so far has been a most excellent story. As a listener, I've invested six-ish hours of my time and will gladly invest that much and more if necessary to finish what could and should be a most excellent story in its entirety. So, c'mon, please get this story finished and please do so sooner rather than later. Ratings will come after the story is complete.

There should be more parts

Are we missing another part? Such a long story and good one at that but with a VERY weak ending 😢

This definitely needs another update with the closure we are all looking for. Feels like a waste of time with that sucky ending.

Great story more from this family would be awesome!

Great part 2 .

Ending sucks. Need more to finish.

A very simple storyline well thought out,a story that could be many parts, l hope to read more stories.

First of all this is unfinished second the brother at least deserve the rematch third Chelsea needs her portion too, so 6 hours of good but overly prolong story is not satisfying in the end she should be. Not to mention that in the first part i as more interesting how the cheaters are handling there guilt then Kay becomes what he is.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY ❤❤

Ohio U is in Athens OH not Portsmouth or Ironton its off 32 not US 52

Don’t chase the cats even if they run 🤣🤣🤣

This is kind of open ended. Tag me for the sequel please. I'm a huge fan of Larry Correia and his monster hunter international series. This reminds me of it and I kind of hoped there would have been a big guy in a cheap suit and sunglasses take statements and mean mug everyone after the dogman.

I enjoyed this very much and truly hope this story line continues.

Well this is a stupid ending we didn’t even get to see the movie

Great story. Enjoyed both parts and would love to hear more

Left the story hanging. Needs at least a part3 to finish the story off properly.

Is there already a part 3 😮

Any story of fantasy never end's, a good imagination helps, the humans will get older but kai and his family will stay the same apart from the triplets and any werewolf, it's a great story only wish other's would also submit storyline like this. 🎉❤😊😊

Should’ve read the comments first. Still love the channel

Sebastian really gets on my nerves! He seems to think he can just waltz back into Kai's life. Do you think Kai should give him a chance, or is that a bad idea?

Excellent story! Putting aside the supernatural elements (which are awesome!) the tale of the cheaters was so well done. They're not evil, they are humans who do stupid/bad/wrong things for stupid/bad/wrong reasons. Just like all of us. This humanizing of those characters took this story up a level IMO.

interesting story if a little long winded

2nd time listening. Definitely keep them coming 😊

what a wonderfull story, please, more of them...❤❤❤❤❤👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

You need a part three. Something that ties everything together, helps Tabitha understand what she saw, and explains about Melissa; was she running with the pack? Did Shannon and Melissa ever get training for their "witchins" so they could associate more with that community? So many loose ends to tie up!

Leave it to a mother to post crap to FB that should not be there.

Part 3 please.

The ending was a bust

I love these stories, I need five more

The one thing this story didn’t have is when Ky beat the sh*t out of his brother in the end-I kept waiting but it never happened…..

I was waiting for Ky to take shape of his brother, sleep with his brother's wife, and shape-shifting back to his original shape, before his brother caught them.

This story is amazing please bring on more

We need a number 3

More please l love this